miércoles, 2 de noviembre de 2016

THE REAL EXPERIENCE.

In the exchange with Germany, one day we went to island Langeoog, and the teachers gave us some free time. My friends and I went to the supermarket to buy some food, and I bought some bread with cheese and sausages. When we left the supermarket, I took my bun in my hand and suddenly a seagull came and it landed in my shoulder. It grabbed my bun with its break and flew away. So all my friends laughed a lot at what had happened to me. Later my friends and I went with the German students to the beach, but we didn´t swim because the water is was very cold.

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  1. Be careful with:

    -"break" = "beak" (l.3)
    -"is was" remove "is" (last line)

    Grade: 8

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