DESCRIBING A A PICTURE:
As you can see this photo shows some people in a small beach. In the photo you can look a lot of trees in the beach. In this small beach the water is very cold. Maybe the people is in holidays, because there are a lot of parents with his children, and the children is playing in the water. This photo is in summer.
COMPARING PICTURES:
Both photos show people. In photo C, the people are in a small beach, but in photo D, the people are in the car and take photos with the camera to the animals. In the first photo there are a lot of people, and the second photo are four persons and there aren´t children. In picture C the people are in the water, and in the other picture, the people are taking a photos.
The beach and the jungle is very different, because in the beach there is water, but in the jungle there are vegetation and muchs animals.
VERY SERIOUS MISTAKES: adjectives in plural, verb TO BE, MUCHS????
ResponderEliminarBe careful with:
"you can look" = "you can see" (l.1)
"people is " = "people are" (l.2)
"in holidays" = "on holidays" (l.2)
"his children" = "their children" (l.3)
"children is" = "children are" (l.3)
"take photos" = "are taking photos" (l.4)
"the second photo are four persons" = "in the second photo, there are four people" (l.5)
"a photos" = "some photos" (l.7)
"the beach and the jungle is" = "the beach and the jungle are" (l.8)
"muchs animals" = "many animals" (l.9)
Grade: 7